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laleesh
02-13-2004, 11:19 PM
spiral
cocoons

to the call
of the rain tunes
untwist

for a kiss

from the pink lips of spring.
Mac
02-13-2004, 11:46 PM
wow, I love the feel here, nicely done my friend..
Poeticpiers
02-14-2004, 10:44 AM
Pure magic laleesh ivor
Michael
02-14-2004, 06:42 PM
laleesh, this piece is so wonderfully worded. Your use of the language continues and continues and continues to amaze me. Other than possibly intentionally writing a haiku, I know that I could never make poetry as beautiful as yours with so few, extremely well chosen words.

And there’s even rhyme in this one. Very unique and musical rhyme, but rhyme just the same.

You have a talent that is all but unmatched.http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/ups/DeNiro/flower.gif
Yalith
02-16-2004, 11:40 AM
Beautiful job of personification, laleesh!
Good read.
monkey boy
02-16-2004, 04:14 PM
Originally posted by Michael
laleesh, this piece is so wonderfully worded. Your use of the language continues and continues and continues to amaze me. Other than possibly intentionally writing a haiku, I know that I could never make poetry as beautiful as yours with so few, extremely well chosen words.

lala has mastered her own poetic form. I know better than to attempt it.
mb