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DarkestDoor
02-15-2004, 03:27 AM
here is a special piece i wrote, in honor of the holiday. happy Valentine's Day, everybody!

As i sit here on the floor
waves of pain
waves of laughter
funny how memory leaves you
nice while it was
nice while we were
together
one
now only I
left alone
mourning, singing
to myself songs of love
stare into nothing
hand is warm
blood is dripping
close my hand
squeeze flesh
your heart
warm to the touch
yet now useless
lacking a body
no more soul
it is my valentine
all that is left
of you
in my hand
how could i?
your bleeding heart
oh, your bleeding heart

TearyEied
02-15-2004, 09:10 PM
beautiful, very visual. good job.

Teary

DarkestDoor
02-16-2004, 02:51 AM
thanks. not one of my best, though.

TearyEied
02-16-2004, 11:30 AM
oh, i dissagree!!!!!!!

teary

Dandylion
02-16-2004, 01:07 PM
gooey, wet and very dark come to mind;) I liked this one, creative and dark...the symbolisms...excellent:)~Dandy

Territorial Hawk
02-19-2004, 11:39 PM
Happy Valentine's Day, indeed.