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Jessie
02-17-2004, 08:11 PM
Swallow the heart
and surround it with
Me
Everything is the same
as it used to seem
_only moods change.
Hold the pen still
shaking in flith.
i don't know where to go
TearyEied
02-17-2004, 09:15 PM
Beautiful line to end with.Great poem
I don't know where to go

Teary
Territorial Hawk
02-19-2004, 07:01 AM
Jessie,

Swallow the heart
and surround it with
Me
Everything is the same
as it used to seem
_only moods change.
Hold the pen still
shaking in flith.
i don't know where to go

This is a beautiful poem.
Dandylion
02-19-2004, 01:28 PM
very powerful piece...leaves much to the imagination and I like that:)~Dandy