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Lyly
02-18-2004, 04:01 PM
And you run, and you run
far away from here
And you fly, and you fly
until you can't hear
all you need to know to live with love
Oh, you run

Ruled by you emotions
Disciplined by your fear
Can't quite rememberm what you're living for
Breathing for the feeling
Beating just because
Believing what you want

And you run, and you run
far away from here
And you fly, and you fly
until you can't hear
all you need to know to live with love
Oh, you run

Living with cliches
Every night's the same
I'd rather be a little untamed
than fall inside the lines
If just for once, see how green
my eyes have become

And I run, and I run
far away from here
And I fly, and I fly
until I can't hear
all of the reasons why I should stay
Oh, I run

But you run, and you run
far away from me
And you fly, and you fly
until you can't see
what you left behind, what you could be
Oh, you run

And you run, and you run
far away from here
And you fly, and you fly
until you can't hear
all you need to know to live with love
Oh, you run

Territorial Hawk
02-20-2004, 12:02 AM
Living with cliches
Every night's the same
I'd rather be a little untamed
than fall inside the lines
If just for once, see how green
my eyes have become


Wicked.

Matt
02-20-2004, 05:39 AM
Excellent!
The repatition of the words 'Run' & 'Fly' gives it a really good sense of pace and flow.
Well done!

Lyly
02-21-2004, 08:55 PM
Thanks both Matt and T. Hawk. Much appreciated! - Lyly

Angel
02-22-2004, 07:28 AM
This is a great song lyly! I love all the images you have used!

Jess :angel:

darkfaze2003
02-22-2004, 11:43 AM
very nice lyly. Seems to have a natural rhthym of its own, feels like footsteps running. reminded me of a day not too lonmg ago when i tried to run away from everything but couldnt.

Lyly
02-22-2004, 12:11 PM
Thank you Angel! And thank you darkfaze - I always love it when people relate my songs to their lives!

Lady Arduriel
02-22-2004, 04:11 PM
i feel like running away from things all the time...somebody always holds me back and tells me I can't go. it gets frustrating after a while.

good write.

Lyly
02-22-2004, 05:59 PM
Thanks Lady A- always nice to hear from you.