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spunky22
02-18-2004, 07:16 PM
trees are so
poetic
especially
when bright
orange nooses
are tied
around their neck

beththepoet
02-18-2004, 07:22 PM
Gorgeous poem...

spunky22
02-18-2004, 08:01 PM
thank you, I wrote it in my had as I walked out of my gate this morning and saw at least 20 trees with red laces wrapped around them

Dandylion
02-19-2004, 01:35 PM
wow...yes...gorgeous is right. I love this one and I think you have an immense amount of talent girl..keep posting:)~Dandy

spunky22
02-19-2004, 07:21 PM
Thanks a lot Dandy, I think you are an amazing writer yourself :D

Territorial Hawk
02-24-2004, 10:40 PM
Spunky,

I love this, I enjoy this style of poem.

They've tied orange ribbons around the trees at O'Connor Ridge near where I go to uni.

spunky22
02-24-2004, 11:30 PM
It almosts hurts to watch how much of an immense number get crowned...thanks though Hawk, Marji

spunky22
02-28-2004, 05:23 PM
yeah, I hate when that happens especially when it was a good one! thanks though deanseven I really enjoyed writing this one!

Marji