Love Game

[TearyEied]

He was sitting there trying
So hard not to cry
As he watched the tears
Fall free from her eyes.

Nothing he could do
Nothing he could say
Could make her stop wanting
To take her life away.

"It's just too much to handle,"
She thinks in her head,
"He'd be better off without me...
I'd be better off dead."

He holds her hand
Trying to console her pain
He does not yet know
They're love was but a game.

She kisses him softly
As she gets up to go home
"I love you more than anything-
But you'll be better off alone."

That night he took his life,
Thinking "I can't go on without her,"

She walks up to his casket,
Her hands behind her back,
An evil grim across her face,
breaking hearts was her knack.

"My last memory of you is a blur,
But my life will go on, I'll be ok,
I can live without you-
Tomorrow is another day."

Teary

[Territorial Hawk]

Taery, very dark.

[TearyEied]

Thank you, Hawk.

Teary

[DarkestDoor]

nice. i like the suicide theme. it's something that seems to enter into my work lately.

[Dandylion]

wow! Like a viscious Romeo and Juliet...I loved this!~Dandy

[TearyEied]

Darkest-
Tanks so much for reading.

Dandy-
wow I didn't even think of that- and thanks!

Teary

[poisndthotz]

This is SO cruel.I love it. :clown:

[iblieve]

I dated that girl awhile back, luckily I disappointed her ass. Left a smiling with my brokenness held in check and wrote a **** load of poetry about her. I loved the unique twist at the end. iblieve

[spunky22]

What an awesome, vivid piece!! Great characterization! I loved the girl she was totally wicked!- Marji

[TearyEied]

Poisn- Thanks so much for your reply!

Iblieve- I'm sorry you had an encounter with this girl. Ya know, it's odd; I ALWAYS (until now) write about my own experiances...and tis just came to my mind, and wouldn't leave! Thanks :) .

Spunky- haha....wicked....yay. thanks a bunch ;)

Teary