The Debt Collected

[DarkestDoor]

I see that look
See it in your eye
After what you took
I know every lie
**** YOU
I'm done drowning now
Never gonna die
I'm not some bloody cow
Made a noose from my tie
**** YOU
Coming back for what i left
taking back my ****ing heart
rectification for one bereft
at your picture i throw one dart
**** YOU
**** YOU
**** YOU

Ah ha ha, my last word is all that counts.
It's my turn, you are the *****.
It's my turn to make you cry.
It's time to collect the debt you owe me.
Sorry *****, you've gotta go.

**** you

[Dandylion]

not the least bit bitter are we?..lol...sorry just had to add that. This packs a powerful punch right to the heart of the matter. I think cussing in a poem is wonderful to express how passionate we feel...when used properly, not gratuitiously...you pulled it off. Bravo:)~Dandy

[TearyEied]

I agree with Dandy. Swearing in writing simply excentuates feelings. And this is a very "felt" poem.;) Good job.

Teary

[Territorial Hawk]

This is different, and very bitter.

[iblieve]

I loved it, very direct and to the point. I personally think it is so healing to tell our tormentors to go **** themselves or to get ****ed. A poem to my own liking. iblieve

[Accute_Pyro]

delightfully delicious

as for curseing ... words are words and not to be aimed for nor avoided