Thirst

[amazing kate]

Spring blossomed tonight
as buds multiplied and burst.
An inner voice beckoned
by simply knowing her thirst.

The uncontrollable spasms
keeping pace to her heart's song.
'Twas your sweet voice she heard
whispering it had been too long.

Flowers appear in delightful shades
as winter's chill prepares to sleep.
Then suddenly the earth moves..
'Tis spring! no more will she weep.

Warmth covers her lush petals,
a flower once buried will sing.
Blushing shades of deepest red ~
O sweet spring, might love begin?


Katherine Chandler
January 30, 2004

[Dandylion]

this is beautiful kate and I love that last stanza...wonderful~Dandy

[amazing kate]

Thank you so much Dandy.. spring and love seem to go arm in arm. I appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts... Kate

[Territorial Hawk]

The uncontrollable spasms
keeping pace to her heart's song.
'Twas your sweet voice she heard
whispering it had been too long.


Very nice :)

[amazing kate]

Thank you Hawk, I'm glad you enjoyed.. nice to
meet you. Kate

[iblieve]

Hi Kate, your poetry is amazing and welcome to Ac. I know you will love it here. The entire poem was awesome, but I loved the last stanza. iblieve

[amazing kate]

Thanks for the welcome ibelieve, and the compliments. I love spring so and to incorporate love in the middle just seems so natural. I'm glad you enjoyed my muse..

Kate :D

[amazing kate]

I just noticed I've posted this in the wrong place. LOL.. I will get used to the site with time.. there is nothing sad about this poem!!


Thank you all for being patient and kind.

Hugs,
Kate

[spunky22]

Oh, I don't think I would have even realized that it was posted in a different place! Dont worry about it! I do it all the time :)! Beautiful piece I love the metaphors!
Marji

[amazing kate]

I think I have the hang of the posting part. I'd like to learn how to use graphics next.. giggling.

I am so glad you understood the metaphors, few people do.


Thanks again Marji!

(((hugs)))


Kate