kiss

[Yalith]

a shock of warmth
then steam lifts from melted snow
vapor and sunlight embrace
and with a kiss
winter is gone

copyright 2004 Jennifer George

[Poeticpiers]

A short but sweet farewell :excellent ivor

[Territorial Hawk]

Yalith,

well done :)

[Michael]

Jennifer, what an encouraging extended metaphor! I look forward to my local “shock”. http://www.computerpannen.com/cwm/ups/unknown/sunshine.gif

Nicely done.

[naturalist]

awesome!!

truly remarkable ~

[monkey boy]

nicely done - I'm waiting for just that sort of kiss
here.
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[laleesh]

oh, mother and those steamy kisses! nobody can warm a heart like her!



this is super delightful!
:)
laleesh