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thorazine
02-22-2004, 01:39 PM
why do i always trust you? do i see something in you aside from this evil person that even you admit?
i expect the best from you-maybe because i know you are an intelligent guy-doctors, friends, peers, even lawyers have told me i need to not trust you-i need to look at the big picture and stop looking at this painted picture i have of you in my head-so ive been slowly unveiling your picture that i put away a few years ago, covered and out of view-lately ive been pulling the cover away bit by bit scared as to whats underneath-finally i uncovered it and you know what the painting looks like now?
its the painting i made of you when we met but changed-its blackened not from fire or anything but from disease-you are all alone which is different from the original as you did have your family and me and kayla with you-the old painting you looked happy, the edges were curling and dark but the rest was very beautiful-
the painting now reeks of apathy, cruelty, and laughter-hollow laughter-you are dressed very nicely and have a half smile on your face-this smile is fake-it is only there as a relic of the past when your smile actually meant something and was true-the edges now are torn and the frame is missing-
the canvas is curling not inward on itself but outward, as though it too is trying to escape its own image-
i know you are still in there-i know the painting can change yet again like everything else-i know it will never go back to its original state but i hope it can change to something happier and not so awful to look at-
i will cover it up again and maybe in the distant future i will unveil it and there will be you and kayla and everyone close to you standing next to you again-and your smile wont be forced, it will be genuine-

beththepoet
02-22-2004, 08:28 PM
beautiful :)

Barbriat
02-22-2004, 08:48 PM
This piece has vivid images which convey messages. Still, I can't get past the feeling it is a Personal Message (PM).

thorazine
02-22-2004, 11:45 PM
thanks for the comments! and as far as the personal message feeling, no i wanted to post this in this way-it has been emailed to its recepient but i liked it and wanted it on here as it was one of those things that just start coming out of you when you least expect it and when i was done i really wanted to share it-
so thanks again!
cheers
TT

Tavis263
02-23-2004, 01:43 AM
Well done. As usual. :)


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tony schofield
02-24-2004, 06:06 PM
You've touched on something profound here. How much of any of us is a picture? We live in a world that seems to be obsessed with image, and image so often hides the reality. The reality is usually only revealed after we're committed to it, whether that committal is via our marriage, our purchase or our vote. Nice writing, and thanks for sharing

tony