whisper

[Tavis263]

whisper and begin to wonder
tomorows voices, a cause for pondering
about the fear that lasts forever
let me hold you to the sunlight
and watch you melt away
sorrow such a modern desease
like new years eve, a count down to one
these journeys are never made undone
please take these words away
for there's nothing left to say

[Dandylion]

let me hold you to the sunlight
and watch you melt away

I particularly loved those two lines...such symbolism. Beautiful my friend...keep em coming~Dandy

[spunky22]

I loved this poem the symbolism is very beautiful
Awesome work!
Marji

[Territorial Hawk]

This is brilliant.

[iblieve]

Dark words of wisdom and light. I also found it brilliant.

let me hold you to the sunlight
and watch you melt away

Loved that line
iblieve

[Tavis263]

:)

[Bryan]

please take these words away
for there's nothing left to say

just awesome

I find words tend to be useless as well

[VelvetCrow]

love it, I like your muse...