furious flurry

[laleesh]

sycamores unballed

gumballs
burst

seed shawls flung from furry berths spring free
and float
to fertile earth like snow

in dirty ermine.

[Michael]

laleesh, it’s fascinating how you can frame formulations with so few fine fettled figures. I just love alliteration. http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/contrib/corky/corkysm60.gif

The words you choose in “furious flurry” are creative and vivid.

Your writing is absolutely amazing! You have talent!

[Territorial Hawk]

Laleesh,

this is amazing.

[laleesh]

thank you very much, michael; HUGE dose of encouragement!

and hawk, i have been following lenny's thread in open discussion on the gathering in august, and i have gathered YOU are quite amazing too!!!! you are a story, girl!


:)
lala

[Poeticpiers]

My Lady you have found the key
which unlocks natures door
you pen your words so fluently
and never miss a metaphor

ivor

[laleesh]

aw, dearest ivor, none of my silly stuff would mean a thing without the audience of this lovely group of visionaries i've met with here at AC. i know sometimes you have to really strain to "see" what i'm trying to say, and sometimes i'm sure don't see it at all, but who would know, you are all so very gracious, and kind.

love ya,
:)
laleesh

[Meta]

this is brilliant!

I need to visit nature more often, for sure.

Meta

[naturalist]

man what I would do to get a gumball at the store right now!

nice work! *

[blurred]

wow..that was furiously good. :)

[topaztwin]

Poetry at its best! It reads as if I am standing there.