came the camellias

[laleesh]

came the camellias (essential descent)...

big fluffies
peep

through dark green leaves

pink
abashed

embarrassed beauties

loathe to shame the naked trees
so rooted deep

in winter.


came the camellias ll (sacrifice)...

petals
dripping scarlet

bound

heart
of winter slipping
down

crown the frozen fallow ground
beneath a bush

in blood.

[monkey boy]

so much of nature undergoes transformation. deep unstoppable processes underlie the simple beauty of your observations.

lovely poem.
mb

[laleesh]

oh yes,
mb, you're right.

nature's nature's transformation;
her loveliest process,
camellia.






thank you,
:)
lalala

[Poeticpiers]

I have only seen these beauties thtough your eyes but I am satisfied

[Territorial Hawk]

Beautiful.

[topaztwin]

Your words are so pleasing to read, as pleasing as the picture painted by them.

[ocean girl]

Wonderful:)