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Lyly
03-10-2004, 10:03 PM
Golden light shining down on you
Perfumed flowers in the air
Even when it rains
She shines like a rainbow
You can see stars and lightning in her eyes
Guess it’s not really a surprise
That you were just waiting for summer

I hope you have a very nice summer
I hope you have a beautiful summer
I hope you have the very best summer
Because I’ll be gone by fall

Long live the night, with always glowing light
She’ll always be fun
She’ll always make you smile
She’ll let you have your way
She’ll always be there for you
Always fits your schedule, never waiting for you
It’s all about you-

I hope you have a very nice summer
I hope you have a beautiful summer
I hope you have the very best summer
Because I’ll be gone by fall

Winter and Spring hold no joy for you
Can never pleasure you like summer
Into your heart, into your mind
They’re always cold
No matter how beautiful, how colorful
So I guess you will always be –
Waiting for summer

I hope you have a very nice summer
I hope you have a beautiful summer
I hope you have the very best summer
Because I’ll be gone by fall

darkfaze2003
03-11-2004, 09:49 PM
beautifully bitter. makes me want to spit on the "beach" (pun not originally intended but left after realized LOL)!!!! And I love the way you save fall for the end, i was wondering as a reader where it was (after you introduce spring and winter), and oh, there it is, the sledgehammer at the end of summer!!!!!! FALL... as in off a cliff!!!!terrific Lyly, well done!!!

Lyly
03-11-2004, 10:29 PM
:) Thanks so much df...always appreciated.

Matt
03-13-2004, 05:49 AM
This is fantastic writing and very vivid. Well done!

Lyly
03-15-2004, 11:39 AM
Thanks you Matt, I'm glad you think so. Cheers.

Lyly
03-19-2004, 08:18 PM
Hm...yes, a sort-a pop way...but yes also a bit sultry...with a bitter twinge that gives it a hint of rock... Thanks for reading fraidycat.