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Yalith
03-11-2004, 01:00 PM
Old Mickey was young once.
He worked hard
from sunup till night.
He dug until his fingers bled,
pulling potatoes
from cold, rocky soil.
He dreamed noble dreams
and ate like a pauper.
Then hope docked nearby.
He blessed Old Saint Patrick
as he begged alms for passage.
Soon he gathered his children
and his wife
and sailed on a ship for opportunity.
Across the blue
the grass was greener
but harder to find.
Industry hung in a poison fog
that smothered the summers
but could not block the gray winters.
Old Mickey worked hard
from sunup till supper.
He worked until his fingers bled,
moving cargo on brutish,
salty docks.
He dreamed noble dreams
and ate bacon and biscuits
salted with tears of gratitude.

Copyright 2004 Jennifer George :stpatty:

Territorial Hawk
03-11-2004, 02:08 PM
Yalith,

I enjoy the story in this poem.

laleesh
03-11-2004, 11:46 PM
good job, yalith. this brings to mind the horribly stark and brutal picture "gangs of new york" that i did, from the perspective of history, enjoy never the less.



:)
laleesh

mike poet
03-11-2004, 11:52 PM
WOW!!:eek: Good writing!

BamBiPurr
03-12-2004, 02:18 AM
Nice progression in the circle. I like.

Yalith
03-12-2004, 09:11 AM
Thanks, guys!

I really enjoy historical stuff :)

monkey boy
03-12-2004, 11:00 PM
Excellent description of many a poor immigrant's tale.
mb

'some of them came from the stony lands,
and some came from the paths of the plain
they were out on the run
and feeling the wrath of the rain...'

- Horslips

dreammagic
03-13-2004, 04:56 PM
Very nice narrative poem - much enjoyed the read.

Phil

BamBiPurr
03-17-2004, 12:49 PM
see my post in this forum for that, dream!