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darkfaze2003
03-15-2004, 09:33 PM
Blown Away

I’m just a little blown away
I guess that’s all there is to say
In a way, I thought you’d stay
Now I’m just a little blown away

I’m just a little blown away
Didn’t now you felt that way
Who’s to judge, who’s to say
Whatever happened anyway

I’m just a little blown away
I found the note you left today
Who’s to blame, who’s to pay
Whatever happened anyway

I’m just a little blown away
Things just didn’t go my way
I don’t have much more to say
‘Cause I’m just a little blown away

I called you up the other day
You weren’t home, your message played
Said, I’m not here but that’s okay
Leave a message anyway

I didn’t have enough to say
To leave a message anyway
I’m still a little blown away
Whatever happened anyway

I saw you with him again today
You never even glanced my way
I guess that’s all you had to say
I’m just a little blown away

Kamikaze
03-15-2004, 09:42 PM
It's really odd... swinging from your last piece "'Til someone better comes along", which was a rhythmic, dark and quite brutal piece to this.

It seems quite muddled, like you're not sure what to do next. Must've been some experience to leave you so confused.

The best part of this are these two stanzas:

I called you up the other day
You weren’t home, your message played
Said, I’m not here but that’s okay
Leave a message anyway

I didn’t have enough to say
To leave a message anyway
I’m still a little blown away
Whatever happened anyway

And then to swing in to seeing her with someone else... I couldn't help but think - maybe thats all it was meant to be.

Nice piece... a little muddled, but considering what I see this piece being about, thats not surprising. You got rhythm, thats for sure... it reads at a nice pace.

Enjoyed. Thanks :)

Matt
03-16-2004, 04:51 PM
Kami's right... you definatly have rhythm. It's a good piece one of my favourites probably and I agree with Kami on which stanzas are the best. Keep writing (and tell us when you've got it recorded)!

darkfaze2003
03-16-2004, 08:16 PM
hey gang, it is just a wandering piece, about being blind-sided and not really knowing if you deserved it or not, why it happened, or what it was about from the other side....a confused and sort of undecipherable space that leaves you, well, blown away!!! I originally wrote this to go with some already existing music by someone else but i am thinking i may put my own tracks to it sometime soon for my second vanity album. thanks for the responses!!!!