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laleesh
03-19-2004, 01:43 PM
fire
flares

as winter fails

dawn lights soft
where darkness trails

yin to yang in equipoise
lifts her veil
and makes a noise like buttercup

uncurling.

the_grey_girl
03-20-2004, 08:17 PM
Wow, laleesh, this is really, really beautiful!

Meta
03-20-2004, 10:01 PM
speechless...

you are amazing...

and makes a noise like buttercup

*swoon*

Meta

Michael
03-21-2004, 04:45 PM
laleesh, you just keep the beauty coming. What a wonderful way of welcoming spring without forgetting winter. “Equipoise”, “ying to yang”. You choose language like the sky chooses sunlight. http://smilies.jeeptalk.org/contrib/fk/sunny.gif

laleesh
03-22-2004, 11:10 AM
thank you grey, meta and michael - i'm SO pleased to share my spring celebration with you!


:)
laleesh