Nature's Dance

[soarineagle]

Trees dance majestically in the wind
...swaying to and fro
rain adds a tempo all its own
to Nature's Dance.

As the wind
increases, the dance becomes a living entity
...dancing out of control.

The breeze calms and the dance changes to a seductive waltz
...elements of nature come together
to create the music for the dance.


all of nature has a hand in seeing the dance complete.
accomplishing the dance is a wondrous sight indeed
...for Nature's Dance is there for all to see.

[Michael]

Deborah, this is a wonderful extended metaphor.

The dance has many faces.
Originally posted by soarineagle
As the wind
increases, the dance becomes a living entity
...dancing out of control.

The breeze calms and the dance changes to a seductive waltz
...elements of nature come together
to create the music for the dance.
You segue from an almost frenetic second stanza to a calm third stanza.

The last line of “Nature’s Dance” may be the most insightful. Nature is always there for all to see. In the case of your poem, it would be nice if Nature was there for all to emulate. http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/contrib/fk/daisy.gif

Nicely written.

[soarineagle]

Micheal and to others
thank you for your insightful words to my poem.
I enjoy writing and if someone walks away with a better insight to themselves. then I think I did my job

[tanto]

a lovely reminder. I always enjoy seeing the leaves waltz and caress the wind. Nicely written, thank you for sharing your work.

[soarineagle]

Thank you very much,
I will be writing more and posting more.
in between reading the wonderful poems that are posted here.
Happy Cino De Mayo everyone

[Territorial Hawk]

Beautiful.

[soarineagle]

Thank you