walkin' molasses - new in nature

[tanto]

walkin' molasses
hummers hummin'
dewberry tides
blazin simmerin'
summer swingin'
ripplin' reflections
the way you feel
springtime
through my veins

[Territorial Hawk]

Mm... nice.

[tanto]

Not my usually thing, but thought I'd give it a whirl anyway. Thank you hawkette.

[Michael]

tanto, is there any poetic device you didn’t use is this piece? It’s a virtual clinic! You need to give The Nature Forum more “whirls”. :D

Great write! I like it a lot! http://instagiber.net/smiliesdotcom/otn/wink/thumb.gif

[naturalist]

refreshing

[Wylde]

yummy

[tanto]

Michael - that is very kind of you to say; perhaps I will.

Thank you everyone for replying.

Take Care