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the_grey_girl
05-08-2004, 12:51 PM
I'll wake up tomorrow
and drink myself blind
for the faceless sisterhood
of those who tried and failed,
those who succeeded and lost,
and those who benefited from their losses.

For all the test sticks
thrown with horror in garbage cans,
and the ones with results celebrated
held in trembling thankful hands...
I propose a toast to both sides:
May you all find your way.

I raise my glass also for kind neighbors
who worry behind curtains over the child next door
and invite them in when they're locked out waiting
in the snow or rain in ill-fitted clothes,
without asking them too many prying questions
because they've seen enough to already know....
Thank you for the cookies, milk and kindness.

A toast to the mothers with children, and without,
to the mothers who took over when the real ones failed,
A toast to all the tiny graves that were never dug,
and to the dumpsters where the pieces were thrown away....

A separate glass for a girl I met named Lisa
who cried over her decision beside that dumpster every day
until the police would come and force her away....

And the last glassful, I'll pour clean,
pure without self-pity and bitterness,
and dedicate these last precious drops
to my own mother --
Thank you for the gift of my life.

Happy Mother's Day.

Territorial Hawk
05-09-2004, 09:28 PM
Oh, fantastic.

Dandylion
05-25-2004, 10:04 PM
by far...your best piece yet. You astound me my dear. I think everyone should read this...it is so wise.~Dandy

Moonshine
05-29-2004, 10:49 PM
Oh, my god. This is so profound. And yes, this is definitely one of your best, by far! You have such clarity, in this piece. Simply fantastic. I'm only sorry that I didn't find this sooner.

Moon x

the_grey_girl
05-31-2004, 02:50 PM
Wow, thank you all so much!

Patchouli Patriot
06-19-2004, 10:42 PM
Grey - Thank you for writing this, it means so much to me on so many levels that have named and some you haven't and couldn't know, but have hit so precisely.
mother is woman, and so woman is mother... in no matter what state.

cheers. to free will. to the right to make decisions.

thank you woman.
Patch

m_miles
07-19-2004, 09:47 AM
Yes, definitely your best. And with such composure.

A mature piece of work. :)

Sincerely,
miles

thoughts
07-19-2004, 04:46 PM
A very wonderful piece of writing, from a wise and talented lady! Thank you for the pleasure of reading it.
Good wishes to you!
Thoughts.