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laleesh
05-09-2004, 04:15 PM
no spires
of light will fire
this night
of fierce and frightful rain
wish all you might this beltane
washed in gray
save
for tapers oiled
and wrote
rescue boats for tides like these
remedies
once wisely tucked away.
Poeticpiers
05-09-2004, 05:21 PM
Merry meet and merry part
but always blessed be
Though weather may keep us apart
we keep in touch heart to heart
naturalist
05-10-2004, 01:04 AM
shall we call the barge and lift the veils - this has a lovely cosmic force laleesh. I always love reading your work. thank you.
Territorial Hawk
05-10-2004, 04:24 AM
Very nice.
Michael
05-10-2004, 01:54 PM
laleesh, even though I’m not real familiar with the festival, I guess they never had it in Sicily, the title defines what I think you want the tone of the piece to be, i.e., even in the face of adversity, May 1 is going to come. I could be wrong.
You definitely got me with the alliteration and the “dancing” rhyme. As always, laleesh.
laleesh
05-10-2004, 10:26 PM
well, thank you everyone - and i can't help but say it especially to ivor - but dernit! i posted this on my grandson's computer without the benefit of my notes and left out two lines!
it's fixed,
if ever it was broke
:)
laleesh
monkey boy
05-13-2004, 11:25 PM
A single flame is all you need
to welcome back the sun...
lovely and steeped in significance
for me, married on Beltane under
the light of the young sun.
mb
have only recently beenlearning abouut Beltane and Imust say this poem reinforces the spirit in me. Nice piece.....
laleesh
05-15-2004, 09:32 PM
oh-oh mb; now i will have to ever toast the happiness and success of you and your beloved as i sit before my beltane bonfire - or taper, as the case may be. yet another rich dimension to my most sacred and favorite of fests :) !
and beki, i wish you profound joy in your studies of beltane and any or all of the ancient pagan feasts and holy days if that is where your interest and curiosity lead you! :)
Redstormy
05-19-2004, 02:01 AM
So much said in so few words, lovely write :)
Red
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