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Territorial Hawk
05-21-2004, 11:51 PM
Currawong

currawongs
have returned from the mountains
black feathers
shining
in bright morning
sunlight

snowfall
high up
freezes the air
river water runs
icy

sunrise
reveals a white
frosty land

as winter returns
to my valley

pupulupk
05-22-2004, 11:00 AM
beautifully created!

Territorial Hawk
05-22-2004, 11:01 AM
Thank you :)

laleesh
05-22-2004, 01:00 PM
oh this is so simple, serene, a thoroughly enjoyable first read of the day,


beautiful!
:)
laleesh

Territorial Hawk
05-23-2004, 05:24 AM
Thank you :)

Anitha Varma
05-23-2004, 09:12 AM
it is beautiful!
Regards, Anitha.

Territorial Hawk
05-23-2004, 09:14 AM
Thanks :)