supersedance...

[laleesh]

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seed,

in deed
the mother stash;

priceless cache packed for winter
stalled in fall for time
to splinter end from start -
the killing part
some would say -

heart of spring
and heaven's way
snug in summer's luggage.




:)
laleesh

[naturalist]

wonderful comparison of thoughts and play on seasons laleesh. really nice title. the splinter end to start was really thought provoking. intriguing work as always, beautifully mastered!

[Poeticpiers]

As always My lovely so much packed into so few words it has to be witchcraft

[naturalist]

I miss your work laleesh!

[Territorial Hawk]

beautifully done.

[monkey boy]

I can (and do) echo the sentiments of others,
but the kicker for me is that you write about the things
that I cherish; you wonder about the same small wonders
and miracles that I hold dear.
best, Mike