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Gala The Word Wench
10-17-2001, 05:28 PM
You can give yourself airs, girl---
but before you look at me
and say thief
remember the bed you found him in.
And you're assuming he has an invitation,
like I would want
your sloppy seconds?
Girl,
you may think you are the neatest trick
on this astral plain,
but the smell of you
goes right through that cheap perfume
and you may class yourself exotic
but i have seen your eyes woman---
and honey?
I wasn't impressed.
Now run along dear---
Oh? I forgot to say.
He's not here.
Happy hunting, Lady---
and truly---
that language doesn't suit you.

Soul Tribunal
10-17-2001, 08:19 PM
Wow, interesting situation to write about. and Never dull Gala, Bravo..

ST

Tsakliss
10-17-2001, 09:27 PM
Testify, Sister!!!

Gala The Word Wench
10-19-2001, 01:09 AM
Now Steve...
This was purely hypothetical.
Not all poetry is based in real life, right?

But thank you.

Migrant soul
10-19-2001, 06:50 PM
hahah i know too many of those girls..*gag gag* <IMG SRC="rotatesmiley2.gif" border="0">
A good, and funny poem whether fictional or not :D

Penelope Toomey
10-26-2001, 08:57 AM
Remembering the piece I read the line in... :)

Gala The Word Wench
10-26-2001, 09:20 AM
Sigh...

I wrote this in a fit of anger...believing I knew the black hats from the white...and have since learned that God as an AMAZING sense of humor...

Thanks.

Gala :eek:

Gary
10-26-2001, 11:01 AM
*chuckling*

Now this is a lady in control.

Gala The Word Wench
10-29-2001, 08:32 AM
Now I am...thanks

crazybarry
11-01-2001, 09:10 AM
Hey Gala,

This poem is great, and there's a clearly a lot going on. Considering this is hypothetical, Gala, your imagination is strikingly vivid.

- I'm just a jealous guy - hehe.. <IMG SRC="embarass.gif" border="0">

<font COLOR="#FFFFFF"> Girl,
you may think you are the neatest trick
on this astral plain,
but the smell of you
goes right through that cheap perfume
and you may class yourself exotic
but i have seen your eyes woman---
and honey?
I wasn't impressed. </font>

<IMG SRC="flames.gif" border="0"> *sighs*

Harry

Gala The Word Wench
11-01-2001, 09:23 AM
Crazy Barry, who's name is Harry?

I've missed you!

Gala

Nicole
11-01-2001, 02:49 PM
Dude Gala! Control indeed! I'm so bookmarking this. I like what it does to my ego :D

Huggles,
Niccuddly <IMG SRC="angel.gif" border="0">

Gala The Word Wench
11-03-2001, 06:18 AM
Hey Lil Nic...

Thank you girl...you make the old Gala feel lovely!


G. <IMG SRC="clown.gif" border="0">

Nicole
02-05-2002, 11:24 AM
Had to bring this one back up just because it rocked hardcore!

Way to go Lady Yoda!

Huggles,
Niccudly

BrokenHearted86
02-05-2002, 07:39 PM
wow, unique subject to write about ;) Awesome as always

Gala The Word Wench
07-07-2003, 06:46 PM
I was rather pleased with how this little rant turned out...sweets to thew sweet, and all that...

kohlrose
07-24-2003, 08:10 PM
YES!!

Gala The Word Wench
07-25-2003, 11:38 AM
I guess some men learn early on how to turn women against each other...and then you have two women HATING each other...while he sits back like it's American Gladiators---and HE is the prize?

Been there, done that. Next Case!

m_miles
06-26-2004, 03:56 AM
lol... I guess I shouldn't anger you, Gala. Your hypothetical aura's sharper than a sword!

Sincerely,
miles

Aislin_MMH
06-28-2004, 03:49 PM
rotflmao!!!!!

Ohh...I have somebody I would so incredibly love to say this to...WOOHOO!!

You made me feel like Cheering, Gala....*hugs*

~Angie

Gala The Word Wench
06-28-2004, 04:11 PM
Thanks Miles...

And Aislan? FIRE UP THE PRINTER!
You can send them a copy...with a BIG RED LIPSTICK kiss from me!

Aislin_MMH
06-28-2004, 04:13 PM
rotflmao!!!

I love it, I LOVE it!!!!!!


~Angie

xStitchesx
07-16-2004, 05:44 PM
Wow great ! I do have to say !

VelvetCrow
11-13-2004, 11:19 AM
very good poem Gala.

Gala The Word Wench
06-22-2006, 01:39 PM
some things just keep their flavor!

merlyn
07-03-2006, 03:17 AM
Not real? Oh man. . . like ah; I could feel your really starting to get the nails sharpen up. A real cat fight. Giving it the loud mean meow howl. A real cat fight. Good stuff!

Ladyburst
07-06-2009, 12:41 AM
Ouch!


very nice to read you.

Gala The Word Wench
09-21-2009, 07:13 AM
I don't venture here often...but i guess it takes all kinds!!

LadyBukowski
09-22-2009, 02:40 PM
At first.. Looking at the title.. Thought I was in trouble, but I read and love this. Share your (entirely fictional) sentiment. :)

"you may think you are the neatest trick
on this astral plain" my favorite part. :) My mind's voice read that with such venom, loved the kick.

Nice to see you in the Dark :)

EisenheimWorter
10-24-2009, 08:09 PM
It's not bad, considering when it was written. Some clich├ęs in the piece.

Gala The Word Wench
05-06-2010, 02:54 PM
Interesting how often this one surfaces!

LadyBukowski
05-06-2010, 07:53 PM
It's an excellent piece. :)