green leaf

[naturalist]

hushing summer
lingers upon an evening moment
where I hold you unmaskingly naked
raw and sure - bold and brazen
falling from a limb
a season to soon
green - with involuting colors

[preston]

"falling from a limb
a season to soon"

cool image

enjoyed the poem

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[AlienPoet]

Ah, ever so nice .:)

[Terra Incognita]

evoking beyond words . . . - Terra

[auroradraco]

pure and sharp, and much enjoyed! I loved the first two lines especially.

[Beki]

very nice :)

[naturalist]

Thanks for your great comments you guys. I always appreciate it. It's like a present of your presence. I was hoping the fall imagery and eden, etc. would be a tad more apparent in this hot, sticky, sweaty, lovely summer season.

cheers,

to our spirits!

[Territorial Hawk]

nicely done :)

[ompholos]

well placed alliteration

[naturalist]

hey thanks for noticing :)

thank you too mrs...