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naturalist
10-24-2001, 11:30 PM
Eucalyptus Leaves

I walk up the road. Stickiness of the noon sunshine rests on the back of my neck. I take in the sweet aroma of the autumnday. The strap on my shoe feels a little tight and I bend down to massage my ankle; as I do, I am struck by the beauty of two eucalyptus leaves that lay gracefully upon the ground. Carried by the hand of the wind, they find themselves caressing one another. The fall colors bleed into one another like the spotted brush of watercolor. The bend of the leaf reminds me of a woman arching towards ecstasy. Turned upside down, it reminds me of a wide rimmed bowl left on the garden table, with nothing better to do, than to collect the mourning dew. Two leafs lay side by side, like a woman resting her head upon the chest of her partner. You can almost imagine the gracefulness of her toe resting upon the ground as her heel sways slowly back and forth. Passing the time, relaxing, she closes her eyes. Across the lake, I notice the reflection, a mirage of rippling eucalyptus trees with the sky above. The lillies sit upon the slow movement of the lake. I close my eyes softly. I see shoots of light reflecting off my eyelashes forming a rainbow in front of me. A shadow soon rocks back and forth in the air and lands. As I look down, I see, one eucalyptus leaf falling into the arms of another.

Lucia
10-26-2001, 01:16 AM
Naturalist,
Enjoyed your work here. You have some nice imagery
and metaphors in this piece.

Lucia

i.koro
10-28-2001, 08:10 AM
you helped me to be there with you and that is what i needed this sunday morning. thank you

naturalist
12-03-2001, 07:11 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read this Lucia and i.koro. I appreciate your comments very much.


:)

ascension
04-03-2002, 02:18 AM
so true.

naturalist
09-14-2003, 09:14 PM
thank you. I am thinking this might be better suited for the short stories forum.

naturalist
12-31-2003, 05:07 AM
please go and check out delsols poem about eucalyptus in the spirituality forum. She really hieghtens the senses with words

cheers y'all and remember to dream big this upcoming year!

-*-

monkey boy
12-31-2003, 02:50 PM
beautiful capturing of a moment!
mb

Territorial Hawk
12-31-2003, 08:42 PM
Natuarlist,

you've taken me home.

Delsol
12-31-2003, 09:12 PM
naturalist, I followed Hawk in here from Who's Online and am so happy I did. This is breathtaking. Thank you for the nod to my little poem, but your prose is simply divine. I've read it six times. Just ….gorgeous. (sigh)

Dandylion
01-02-2004, 02:58 AM
The bend of the leaf reminds me of a woman arching towards ecstasy. I love the images in this one. Very beautiful my friend:) I enjoyed this alot:)~Dandy

nannabug
01-02-2004, 11:19 PM
Wow, naturalist! I read your words and see what your eyes have seen. Lovely, enjoyable write. Thank you.

naturalist
01-14-2004, 01:11 PM
hey thanks you guys!

your encouragement really means alot. :)

thank you!

have to get going for work soon. I will be by later tonight to read and comment on some good poetry!

Michael
01-14-2004, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by nannabug
I read your words and see what your eyes have seen. Lovely, enjoyable write. Thank you.
Naturalist, I couldn’t have said it any better than nannabug. That’s why I quoted her.

Thank you for allowing me to live in that moment. It’s a wonderfully calm, peaceful and insightful moment, filled with the kind of awareness that we should all experience more often.

naturalist
06-03-2004, 04:35 PM
thank you michael. that is really nice of you to say. I'm going through and archiving some of my work and I found your comment. thank you once again.

p.s. - I sent you a pm regarding your anniversary. :)

monkey boy
06-04-2004, 10:24 AM
I thought this looked familiar - just as good on the second read!
mb

naturalist
06-07-2004, 05:38 PM
thank you mb :D

laleesh
06-07-2004, 09:39 PM
oh naturalist, this gave me "the frisson", as the cajuns say, the chills! you have conveyed this lovely gift in toto just as you received it. thank you!


:)
laleesh

naturalist
07-21-2004, 04:54 PM
my pleasure laleesh, thank you for responding. :)

take care y'all have a great week!

auroradraco
07-24-2004, 04:07 PM
sensually touched

living is worth a thousand paintings, a painting worth a thousand pictures, and a picture worth a thousand words... and you know how to not lose much in the translation!

I'm glad someone came back and commented on this one or I never would have seen it.

naturalist
08-09-2004, 03:34 AM
thank you aaron, your always so kind to me. = )

SooZen
08-09-2004, 11:10 AM
Wow! I am new here and so very lucky that someone brought this up again. I read it aloud to my mate and we were both struck by the beauty of that moment. The metaphor of lovers was wonderful.

SooZen