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laleesh
09-09-2005, 01:58 AM
a wind
danced widdershins

water swept
in leaks and bounds
and levees gaped
to drown

a city sleeping.




(new orleans, 8/29/05)
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laleesh
tanto
09-09-2005, 03:37 AM
You hit a tender spot - with this city sleeping...
Poeticpiers
09-13-2005, 06:42 AM
Sheer witchcraft in magic words you capture a tragedy
e-piph[lol]
09-13-2005, 01:07 PM
laleesh.... even her name sounds like nature