As the Willow

[AlluraD]

Graceful as the willow dipping,
When winter wind blows harsh and drear;
Gentle as the doe bows sipping,
Thirstily from the river clear;
Pliant as the grass lies bending,
Before the onslaught of the rain;
Surely as the heart beats, mending,
The seasons turn, love comes again.

[Meta]

:) it turns, it turns... always turning... beautiful

[Fenris]

See you by the weeping tree . . .

[TRexroth]

i love your rythmic imagery

[Michael]

And Nature’s beauty continues to morph into wonderful poetry!

I agree with TRexroth. The meter is consistent and the imagery models itself.

I was actually going to write “I love your … rhythm”, but, as you can tell from the “….”, I couldn’t think of an adjectival case for “imagery”. ;)

[AlluraD]

*smiling*...back around again I go........thanks to each for reading....have been too long gone~

[Poeticpiers]

simply beautiful I bow to your skill ivor

[AlluraD]

I am very glad to know you enjoyed this one....thank you for saying so Poeticpiers~

[Norman Anderson]

Very snappy.

Grandpa likes this one.