butterflies

[gedwaylem]

butterflies in my tummy,oh how they jummble and rummble and bummble,round and round.catch them in my net and teach them to sing,sing to me and only me my little dreamlets,fly free but leave me your song,your beautiful voices,your beautiful words.giggle riggle and dance with me you can not know the extent of your beauty.the gentleness you exude,how it pulsates,throbs,robs me of my negativity,how it makes me believe...

[e-piph[lol]]

a nature of human nature.

this was sweet.

[gedwaylem]

thanx piph:)

[Wylde]

this reminds me that butterlfies stamp
and
taste with their feet.


delightful!

[Michael]

gedwaylem, your use of sound symbolism and rhyme enlivens this piece. The sound symbolism especially gives the piece a lively, almost frenetic sense.

This was a fun read.

To friendship,
Michael

If I wasn’t for God’s love, there’s be no hate at all.

The Mind Of Michael (http://mindofmichael.com)
Speak Your Mind And Read Mine (http://minusthemusic.blogspot.com)

[gedwaylem]

thank you wylde and micheal,it was fun to write:D glad that you enjoyed

[luvleerenee]

I love flutterbys. Your poem was a light, cheerful, playful thing. How can you read that and not feel a smile creeping onto your lips? :) Thanks!

[gedwaylem]

:)thanx luvleerenee,im fluttered,oops.. i mean flattered,glad that it made you smile

[5letrword]

sensations derived from the dust upon their wings
reminded that butterflies are mystical beings

[gedwaylem]

:)they are indeed,thanx for reading 5letrword