Bushfire

[Territorial Hawk]

Bushfire

the sun, glowing red
a burning coal
in a fire grate

trying in vain
to be seen through smoke
gives up and hides

as flames
engulf our world

[Meta]

this is very powerful and beautiful (in the way something like this can be beautiful)...

I clicked on it thinking it would be a poem against Bush... and, if you read it like that, it works too...

great work, Hawk.

Meta

[Territorial Hawk]

Thank you both :)

[Accute_Pyro]

please meta dont talk about bush ... gimme the hibbie gybbies..

soaring high as usaul Hawk

[Territorial Hawk]

thank you :)

[Norman Anderson]

but it's a burning bush

good job T Hawk

[gedwaylem]

as flames
engulf our world

liked very much

[Territorial Hawk]

Thank you both :)