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affinity
08-19-2006, 05:58 AM
Darkness,

an indigo chalice
brims with infinity

glimmering

on wind-sung clouds,
torn gossamar ribbons
across the limpid moon.

A pure lambence,

bleeding luminousity
out of voluptuousness

her fire cooly ravishes

the soul of absolute silence.

angels
08-23-2006, 05:34 AM
mmm...delicately electrifying...

Norman Anderson
08-23-2006, 12:50 PM
very visual

Wylde
08-23-2006, 03:53 PM
orchestrated like, what norman said, a visual symphony...


:hot::hot:

affinity
08-24-2006, 06:26 AM
Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment.

I do seem to have a strong visual element seeking to express itself through a lot of my poetry. I find the interplay of the senses when they engage with the natural world and the emotions, mind states and perceptions that these interactions engender a playground for creative reflection and contemplation.