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angels
08-31-2006, 10:30 AM
glistening ribbons of green
swaying seducingly
stroked surreptitiously
by gods whispered breath
dancing to the rhythm
of his melodious droplets
tuned in by gentle
pitter-patter
calming
cleansing
purifying
the awaken earth
beneath my feet…

e-piph[lol]
08-31-2006, 02:01 PM
nice! i can smell the rain..
you know, when it just starts teasing up all that dry bone beneath

angels
09-01-2006, 04:46 AM
*peace* ta

Mac
09-03-2006, 10:37 AM
send some of that rain this way, the lawn is already brown.

mac

Norman Anderson
09-06-2006, 08:49 AM
We had enough rain here. I still liked the poem though.

Accute_Pyro
09-06-2006, 12:31 PM
didnt sireen2 warn you all of the rain?

good read angels.

angels
09-07-2006, 03:50 AM
:cool: thanks guys...