assault at dawn

[Mac]

wet dawn dissolves
white mist into blue
mile by mile
frame by frame
imagination
stands still

one if by land
two if by sea
and if by air
count to three

one two three
freeze

bagged the booger
as it crept over
the trees

[lovesetsfire]

saunter in wordplay,
a real wizzbang!
almost dos'ish.

nicely done.

peace;(& pieces).

:cool: :eek: :cool: :cool: :cool:

[TRexroth]

aside from being a really cool read im not sure what the booger
represnts

trex

[Mac]

poem is about taking a photo of the morning sun. ;)

[e-piph[lol]]

well, mac, its definitely a fanciful feeling, but shooting the sun would not have been first in line in my imagination!

funky poem!

[TRexroth]

now i understand mac, it's a great poem
thnx
trex