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laleesh
12-15-2006, 12:56 PM
water
and air

compair

compose
a perfect share
and tap like toes

across the lawn

dance and dip as woodland faun
in leafy folds of night.

e-piph[lol]
12-15-2006, 01:04 PM
oooooo.. i likey this one, too! laleesh - so good to be reading you again!

Mac
12-15-2006, 08:14 PM
between fingers
of gray fog

slivers
of sunshine slip


enjoyed

Poeticpiers
12-16-2006, 05:06 PM
word witchcraft Laleesh you cast your spells so easily to entrance the unsupsceting reader and transport him/het off to your fairyland

shane
12-16-2006, 06:22 PM
Ah, so THAT’s why I love fog so much.

Top, top write.

monkey boy
12-16-2006, 10:10 PM
lovely! I dunno how you dew it :)

mb

ascension
12-21-2006, 01:34 AM
great style, refreshing!