Autumn Picture.

[thelastromantic]

Autumn brown leaves dappled by sun
And lights up the path of forest's walk
Darkened tree bark lines up the run
For lovers to stroll and secretly talk

So sighs the zephyr, late summer breeze
Gently do leaves play to the ground
Kiss goodbye to their mothers, the trees
To float by lovers, homeward bound

The scent of sweet crocus fills the air
Sound strikes as some startled deer run
While stopped in their way are the pair
Shielding their eyes from Autumn sun

Soft reaches the girl up for a kiss
And the boy holds her close as they do
No finer is painting ever seen as this
Autumn brown, forest green, lovers two

[beththepoet]

this is nice. i especially liked the second stanza

[Mac]

well composed, enjoyed the imagery and also the feelings envoked.

[Norman Anderson]

ditto and ditto

[Poeticpiers]

Last line perfect equation

[rrrstop]

Ah, ye stalker! :) Brought a quick smile trying to remember. A very slight rework and this will be ready.

[e-piph[lol]]

enjoyable read - sweetness and innocence plays well into your backdrop