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naturalist
01-15-2007, 02:17 PM
winter shows her silent power
as the cold wraps and whisps through
the fingertips of her wind
it runs through to the core
leaving the naked trees
shaken with her caress
as she cries crystalline
and mac is forced to chip the sidewalk
glad i had today off
well done on the poem my friend.
naturalist
01-17-2007, 10:35 PM
thanks mac :)
jaxom
01-19-2007, 09:28 PM
Such eloquence and great imagery in just a few words ...Thank you !
naturalist
01-23-2007, 01:04 PM
thank you! :D
Norman Anderson
01-27-2007, 09:44 AM
This inspired a story I must tell regarding winter.
Thank you naturalist.
Poeticpiers
01-27-2007, 06:51 PM
Winter has its own austere beauty for those that have eyes to see
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