Earthrise

[jaxom]

cobalt blue
crossed with white
ascends to pitch canopy
eclipsing studded diamonds
the beauty of a home - so far

earthrise over lunar plain

-== Jaxom ==-

[Mac]

Welcome to AC, enjoyed the out of this world view and the shape of your poem.

[laleesh]

oh, sometimes we forget how beautiful we are, don't we! what a wonderful reminder. and image!!!






perspective!!!!!
:)
laleesh

[jaxom]

Thank you for your kind words 'm not such a newbie Mac have bben around since '95 .. though not posted in a loooonnnggg time :)

[Mac]

thought I recognized the name, well welcome back.

:D

[naturalist]

I love the way this poem creates the illusion in the mind of standing behind the earthrise. wonderfully done, thank you!

welcome back!

[Accute_Pyro]

this work helps to bring us to a new perspective of what we are

welcome

*wave*

[Poeticpiers]

mind travel reveals what we cannot normally see Beautifully expressed my friend