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Nativeborn
07-16-2007, 09:44 PM
The blazing Sun was a soft pink orb
On daybreaks veil of simple touchless clouds
All its heat and fiery blast held
Dormant by Nature’s transparent shroud

No longer red crimson glaring flame
Burning away sweet morning dew
Unable to scorch the tender grass
His chromatic color turned a baby hue

Pink is for girls or so they say
And I am not one to contend
Yet to see old man Sun humbled
By crayon stroke he could not transcend

Made me smile to know his weakness
Was not fear of cooling come eternity
Only bowed from his fierceness now
A whim of childlike innocence the key

Poeticpiers
07-17-2007, 04:18 PM
simple and trandscendantly beautiful

Heart2Heart
07-22-2007, 06:18 AM
It was your sun that tempted me
I've travelled many a mile
To read your gorgeous poetry
That always makes me smile !

Lovely imagery in a beautiful poem Nativeborn.

Heart2Heart

Nativeborn
07-22-2007, 07:37 PM
Thank you for a wonderful comment
Poeticpiers, nature is simple natural,

NB

Nativeborn
07-22-2007, 07:48 PM
Heart2Heart, travels take
Us through many moods
Some we fondly recall
As your word exudes,

NB