Bling

[TRexroth]

in a moist green life
the metallic sheen of the beetle
competes with dew drops
on a fresh maple leaf

[georgiagirl]

bling, - a - ling ding.

watch that beetle fly with those wings of life.

dewdrops,of moonlight, as the sun begins to sway.

like a waffle with the maple syrup.

i like this one kool man... :)

[e-piph[lol]]

rainbow beetles bling my eyes to your poe

[shane]

Oh wow, that’s fantastic. You are a diamond T!

[georgiagirl]

one of a kind,

a diamond in the rough! ;)

[5letrword]

cha ching a ling! 3 thumbs

[Norman Anderson]

yeah pretty cool

[Zen Station]

Ever scrunchamunch a huge bulby beatle by mistake? Mmm mmm, I don't want to think about it during supper although I don't think I'll be able to face cottage cheese with green relish on top for a few moons now. Sorry to disturb the quiet beauty of your poem. I do like a woman with some bling in her swing, don't you?

[georgiagirl]

bling, bling and a ding - a- ling- to you as well.

it don't mean a thing if she ain't got that swing!!! LOL,LOL...

[smothereddreams]

i'm lost for words.. i love the lines..

[Beki]

awesome - I see a haiku lurking there.....

new maple leaf -
metallic sheen of beetle
amidst the dewdrops

well, I am sure ther eis a better one lurking but it is definitely a haiku moment

[Poeticpiers]

superb