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mtmynd
09-12-2007, 08:57 PM
Tree:

How quiet your are
Only the wind makes you sing -
breezes thru your leaves
your only sound

You've taken a
Vow of Silence
and you seem to know
that it's not the sound
but the ground
where you stand
that teaches you
this precious silence.

If only I could learn
what you have gained
from listening
year in - year out
without speaking...


mtmynd

doreen peri
09-13-2007, 01:05 AM
This is the final poem of the book. :) Thank you!

mtmynd
09-13-2007, 01:15 AM
hah! what a trip!! :) thx, Dor'!!

judih
09-13-2007, 02:59 AM
cool.
but who knows what those roots are listening to?
will that be the beginning of the next book?

*peace*

georgiagirl
09-13-2007, 11:42 PM
bravo!

kool


and splened.

i like and enjoyed!!!! :)

mtmynd
09-14-2007, 02:44 AM
judih... could roots be the ears that listen for each and every vibration the earth communicates..? hmmm... the next book. yes.

thank you, georgiagirl! i appreciate your words. (((bow)))

georgiagirl
09-14-2007, 04:43 PM
you are very welcome i enjoyed this one it's original.

and quite kool...

Poeticpiers
10-02-2007, 04:27 PM
Trees hear and see the works of man and make no comment Perhaps just as well because men are not friends of trees