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TRexroth
10-08-2007, 07:58 AM
I can follow fall flames
the smoke dulling the sky
the crisp wind straffing branches.
They become skeletal with
voodoo percusive collisions.

Flames in fire pits have tounges
that tickle crispy autum leaves
and sparks mimick constellations.
Stars come out to peek
through gothic skeletal structures.

Poeticpiers
10-21-2007, 11:31 AM
Ritual cleansing by fire Good for the soul

Beki
10-27-2007, 04:27 PM
lyrical and lovely nice poem

e-piph[lol]
10-28-2007, 04:05 PM
very - enjoyed this muchly

TRexroth
10-31-2007, 06:23 AM
thanks y'all sorry 'bout the a misspelling