PDA

View Full Version : - Dearth Villanelle -


HaroHalola
12-14-2007, 03:29 PM
Now, frangible Biosphere
Eco. ecole/Iko-Iko
Self-Righting, Rite of Fear

Algor-hythms/Logo-rhythms burgeon bier
In a "Morld gone Mad, today," (Cole's denoument)
Now, frangible Biosphere

Of those whom listen/speak; en masse you willed not hear
Reign's rain reined as it goes
Self-Righting, Rite of Fear

On Planet Scearth, "third stone from the flare"
And Aquarius, The Water Bearer nary douse these Egos'
Now, frangible Biosphere

Scearth, spinning aswirl nearer & near
To sorrowful & sorrow, who'll help the kelp and snow, Oh
Self-Righting, Rite of Fear

Rhythms not of Seer
Cacophonies below, Harmony's vole
Now, frangible Biosphere
Self-Righting, Rite of Fear.

H.e.m.
12.4.MMvii.

SmileGRL
12-14-2007, 04:14 PM
H'H, your way of "speaking" is so unique and darling. words like morld and frangible and nary...oh my goodness. granted it makes your poems a little harder to understand, but i love it.

about fragile...yes. balance is such a delicate thing

HaroHalola
12-14-2007, 10:25 PM
smileGRL - That I am pleased to be a force in your mentation would be to say I am Thankfilled for Breath; although there is unmistakably, excellent, entertaining Poetry being created by equally, like Poets, some even of import, I take to heart your Words in address to my Work, that with the exception of a smattering of the aforementioned, the predominance, like commercial news, is "produced & cookie-cutter" without variety, nice to Read...but. What you have attributed to my Work frames my Passion & Purpose (not for iconoclastic intent) to "say It in quite the unprecedented way," by Muselle` & by Design. And your experience has a confimation which I am perpetually seeking. Do not believe for an instant I do not encounter Editors/Publishers whom haven't a clue as to "what?..."; this makes my Poetry's Life, to be kind, frustrating, yet redoubling in my efforts to be heralded. TY, smileGRL, for what you have shared, for allowing that I have "moved" you! H'H./H.e.m.