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NikosDad
12-17-2007, 11:24 PM
When the sun was getting ready to come up, I was waiting on a cloud!
Waiting, patiently, for the sun to shine on me
I finally dove down toward the forest
Slowly landing on a soft pillow of snow
Feeling peaceful and at home
Whoosh!
A sled runs over me
I began to melt

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Written by Nikolas "Niko" Iacovelli (Age 10)
and posted by his Dad

Mac
12-18-2007, 08:00 PM
enjoyed, always wonder what it would feel like to be a snowflake, lol I already know thw flake part well. ;)

mac

SmileGRL
12-19-2007, 01:46 PM
...such a big talent for such a young boy. love the playful end. Whoosh!

NikosDad
01-15-2008, 07:25 PM
from my son Nik (word for word)

thank you for reading and (hmm) thanks for the compliments too.

Matt
01-15-2008, 07:50 PM
Talent clearly show itself early. A good read.