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writlife
01-22-2008, 04:01 AM
Morning light, lately awoke by twilight,
Dances in golden dandelions and violet pansies,
Blowing gently, the wind carries
The sighs of the morning yawning awake.
Through the violet skies geese fly south,
Tip of a "V" pointing toward warmer climes.
Why are they leaving this paradise?
Somewhere my cellphone rings.

Poeticpiers
02-24-2008, 06:12 PM
damn devils toys have no sense of occasion

Beki
04-27-2008, 02:52 AM
great last line - intrusion of reality on natur'e musings

writlife
05-06-2008, 11:38 PM
Thank you for your comments! The cellphones have no business ringing most of the time, but then again, we love to reach out and touch someone. ;)

Fenris
05-15-2008, 11:35 AM
Could it be the geese calling you?!