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Old 02-04-2010, 12:49 PM   #1
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I looked at my
Reflection
Secret smiles
In the glass
And melting ice within
Kitty and another
Of her boys
Sat across from us
The music pounding
So close to the
Dance floor
Line dancers
And college kids
Fighting for the space
Crowded as it was
Eventually college won
We laughed and talked
Late into the night
I still feel
I missed something
But that's fine
We don't catch
Everything from
Rum and coke nights
Dancing with
Random boys
Following my own path
Reveling in the
Flashing lights
The power of
My own accountability
Knowing my strength
In not caring
As long as I
Go home alone
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I still feel
I missed something
But that's fine
We don't catch
Everything from
Rum and coke nights
Loved that

Cant say why just has a familiar tone
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