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Fauve · 02-08-2010, 09:28 PM

Who?
(which I wonder about while withering away)
Who will reply,
when why
is what wears me down?

**judih** · 02-09-2010, 09:17 AM

when a why is everything
then no who can answer
(in my opinion---but who asked me?)

Fauve · 02-09-2010, 04:31 PM

judih, it depends what the why is about.....non?

goldenmyst · 02-09-2010, 09:15 PM

Why oh why do we suffer? That's my why for the night. Your Escher poetry is most welcome.

John

Floetry Spades · 02-10-2010, 01:48 PM

thought evoking ... I love the abstract nature of this poem.

**Poeticpiers** · 02-10-2010, 03:22 PM

Why ,where, when and what
are words we tend to use a lot
I see no reason we should not
Sometimes we can untie the knot
recieve answer loud and clear
a voice that whispers in our ear
A message only we can hear.
to show our guardian angel's near

Fauve · 02-10-2010, 03:55 PM

merci Floetry...I love the Picasso of this painted piece as well ;-)

02-08-2010, 09:28 PM	#1
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02-09-2010, 09:17 AM	#2
judih Poet Laureate Moderator Gender: Female Location: kibbutz, israel Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 8,623 Blog Entries: 21	when a why is everything then no who can answer (in my opinion---but who asked me?)

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Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	judih, it depends what the why is about.....non?

02-09-2010, 09:15 PM	#4
goldenmyst Solitary Enigma Advisor Gender: Male Location: Bible Belt :( Join Date: Apr 2000 Posts: 10,972 Blog Entries: 116	Why oh why do we suffer? That's my why for the night. Your Escher poetry is most welcome. John

02-10-2010, 01:48 PM	#5
Floetry Spades Senior Member Gender: Male Location: Mississippi Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 210	thought evoking ... I love the abstract nature of this poem.

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Poeticpiers Poet Laureate Moderator Gender: Male Location: near Durham n/east England Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 10,066	Why ,where, when and what are words we tend to use a lot I see no reason we should not Sometimes we can untie the knot recieve answer loud and clear a voice that whispers in our ear A message only we can hear. to show our guardian angel's near

02-10-2010, 03:55 PM	#7
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	merci Floetry...I love the Picasso of this painted piece as well ;-)




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