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Fauve · 02-08-2010, 09:36 PM

silence speaks
gestures more so
am I lacking movement?

alone I sit
alone I gesture,
am I hearing the unspoken word?

concerned, I am,
of the other involved:
the audience
to which I say nothing

goldenmyst · 02-09-2010, 09:17 PM

Gesturing toward the unspoken like a Koan. Saying nothing says everything.

John

Fauve · 02-09-2010, 09:29 PM

like the song, 'you say it best, when you say nothing at all' ;-)

goldenmyst · 02-09-2010, 09:38 PM

Love that song. Especially the version sung by a woman.

John

Fauve · 02-09-2010, 09:57 PM

yes, I know the one....love it too

Floetry Spades · 02-10-2010, 01:46 PM

This poem makes a world of sense. You can't read someone's mind or gauge his or her emotions. There's loads of uncertainty.

Fauve · 02-10-2010, 03:57 PM

again, ty Floetry

Mac · 02-15-2010, 11:45 AM

sometimes it's what you don't say that matters most in life. enjoyed the read.

Fauve · 02-15-2010, 11:59 AM

too true, Mac

merci

02-08-2010, 09:36 PM	#1
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	unheard silence speaks gestures more so am I lacking movement? alone I sit alone I gesture, am I hearing the unspoken word? concerned, I am, of the other involved: the audience to which I say nothing

02-15-2010, 11:45 AM	#8
Mac Poet Laureate Gender: Male Location: Over the rainbow Join Date: Feb 1999 Posts: 11,562 Blog Entries: 13	sometimes it's what you don't say that matters most in life. enjoyed the read. __________________ Mac I ain't selling my hand-me-down rainbows. http://www.kansaspoets.com/ks_poets/mcmanes_rd.htm

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02-09-2010, 09:17 PM	#2
goldenmyst Solitary Enigma Advisor Gender: Male Location: Bible Belt :( Join Date: Apr 2000 Posts: 10,970 Blog Entries: 116	Gesturing toward the unspoken like a Koan. Saying nothing says everything. John

02-09-2010, 09:29 PM	#3
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	like the song, 'you say it best, when you say nothing at all' ;-)

02-09-2010, 09:38 PM	#4
goldenmyst Solitary Enigma Advisor Gender: Male Location: Bible Belt :( Join Date: Apr 2000 Posts: 10,970 Blog Entries: 116	Love that song. Especially the version sung by a woman. John

02-09-2010, 09:57 PM	#5
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	yes, I know the one....love it too

02-10-2010, 01:46 PM	#6
Floetry Spades Senior Member Gender: Male Location: Mississippi Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 210	This poem makes a world of sense. You can't read someone's mind or gauge his or her emotions. There's loads of uncertainty.

02-10-2010, 03:57 PM	#7
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	again, ty Floetry

02-15-2010, 11:59 AM	#9
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	too true, Mac merci




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