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Fauve · 02-08-2010, 09:40 PM

"play me"

a white note, elapsed,
(between hand's touch, fingers pressed)
is shortened: black

cuticles death - staccato
the back of my nail
rediscovers
(you)

the pause
(your absence)
reappears
and
a clef remains

"..."

goldenmyst · 02-10-2010, 10:26 AM

Disappearance and reappearance, in succession. Emotions proffered and withdrawn. How maddening to the heart.

John

Fauve · 02-10-2010, 03:58 PM

he did disappear......though I felt him still

***Beki*** · 03-03-2010, 10:47 PM

very original - I love it

Fauve · 03-03-2010, 10:51 PM

too many years of conservatory piano....it did muse me on this one ;-)
merci beki

02-08-2010, 09:40 PM	#1
Fauve Senior Member Gender: Female Location: somewhere between pages Join Date: Jan 2010 Critiques: Yes Posts: 499 Blog Entries: 21	Clef "play me" a white note, elapsed, (between hand's touch, fingers pressed) is shortened: black cuticles death - staccato the back of my nail rediscovers (you) the pause (your absence) reappears and a clef remains "..."

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goldenmyst Solitary Enigma Advisor Gender: Male Location: Bible Belt :( Join Date: Apr 2000 Posts: 10,970 Blog Entries: 116	Disappearance and reappearance, in succession. Emotions proffered and withdrawn. How maddening to the heart. John

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*Beki* Beach Blanket Poet Administrator Gender: Female Location: Costa Mesa, CA, US Join Date: Apr 1999 Posts: 15,296 Blog Entries: 4	very original - I love it

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