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Old 04-06-2012, 11:43 PM   #1
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Default ..remnants

in these remnants of roots,
your relevance is a mirror
for my shame
we tore down the tree,
our hands exchanging the axe
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Old 04-07-2012, 09:55 AM   #2
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poignant poem..
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Old 04-07-2012, 04:05 PM   #3
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so true - it goes like that sometime
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Old 04-07-2012, 05:57 PM   #4
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I also hate to see them fall....well done!
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Old 04-07-2012, 07:45 PM   #5
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..thanks much Anitha, Sasha and green..>>i much
appreciate your having read and your comments..>>spiros

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Old 04-14-2012, 09:09 AM   #6
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i've passed and taken the axe a few times myself, well done my friend.

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Old 04-14-2012, 11:17 AM   #7
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..hi Mac..thanks..nice of you to comment.>>spiros

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