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Old 10-17-2001, 05:28 PM   #1
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note unladylike behavior

You can give yourself airs, girl---
but before you look at me
and say thief
remember the bed you found him in.
And you're assuming he has an invitation,
like I would want
your sloppy seconds?
Girl,
you may think you are the neatest trick
on this astral plain,
but the smell of you
goes right through that cheap perfume
and you may class yourself exotic
but i have seen your eyes woman---
and honey?
I wasn't impressed.
Now run along dear---
Oh? I forgot to say.
He's not here.
Happy hunting, Lady---
and truly---
that language doesn't suit you.
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Old 10-17-2001, 08:19 PM   #2
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Wow, interesting situation to write about. and Never dull Gala, Bravo..

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Old 10-17-2001, 09:27 PM   #3
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Testify, Sister!!!
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Old 10-19-2001, 01:09 AM   #4
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Now Steve...
This was purely hypothetical.
Not all poetry is based in real life, right?

But thank you.
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Old 10-19-2001, 06:50 PM   #5
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hahah i know too many of those girls..*gag gag* <IMG SRC="rotatesmiley2.gif" border="0">
A good, and funny poem whether fictional or not
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Old 10-26-2001, 08:57 AM   #6
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Remembering the piece I read the line in...
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Old 10-26-2001, 09:20 AM   #7
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Sigh...

I wrote this in a fit of anger...believing I knew the black hats from the white...and have since learned that God as an AMAZING sense of humor...

Thanks.

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Old 10-26-2001, 11:01 AM   #8
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*chuckling*

Now this is a lady in control.
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Old 10-29-2001, 08:32 AM   #9
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Now I am...thanks
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Old 11-01-2001, 09:10 AM   #10
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Hey Gala,

This poem is great, and there's a clearly a lot going on. Considering this is hypothetical, Gala, your imagination is strikingly vivid.

- I'm just a jealous guy - hehe.. <IMG SRC="embarass.gif" border="0">

<font COLOR="#FFFFFF"> Girl,
you may think you are the neatest trick
on this astral plain,
but the smell of you
goes right through that cheap perfume
and you may class yourself exotic
but i have seen your eyes woman---
and honey?
I wasn't impressed. </font>

<IMG SRC="flames.gif" border="0"> *sighs*

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Old 11-01-2001, 09:23 AM   #11
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Crazy Barry, who's name is Harry?

I've missed you!

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Old 11-01-2001, 02:49 PM   #12
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Dude Gala! Control indeed! I'm so bookmarking this. I like what it does to my ego

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Old 11-03-2001, 06:18 AM   #13
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Hey Lil Nic...

Thank you girl...you make the old Gala feel lovely!


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Old 02-05-2002, 11:24 AM   #14
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Had to bring this one back up just because it rocked hardcore!

Way to go Lady Yoda!

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wow, unique subject to write about Awesome as always
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